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Overheard: a QAF fic

  • Apr. 1st, 2005 at 8:44 AM
My Feet
Pretty explicit, unbetaed. This is the one that I lost half of. I'm actually relieved, though it is different, it is not any better or worse than the lost story. Although if I'd kept that one it might have gone a different way. Please feel free to point out typos and general weirdness. I'm in the story-is-done-but-I-don't-like-it-anymore phase. Why does that always happen? :}

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Justin pushed the door of Woody’s open and was about to walk through the small hall into the main room when he heard his name from inside. It wasn’t as if he’d never heard his name before, but something made him pause in the dark passage and listen, letting the people behind him by.

“You think they’ll ever break up, for real?” asked Michael. A year ago, this would have given Justin a stab in the gut, but now he knew Michael wasn’t asking out of malice, but out of actual curiosity. Or maybe foot-in-mouth syndrome. Justin peeked round the corner to see Emmett, Ted, and Michael at one of the less desirable tables near the door. It was crowded, even for a Friday night.

“No,” said Ted. “I mean, I know I wasn’t a believer before, but after the cancer…” he trailed off.

“Besides,” Emmett took up the conversation. “You know the sex has got to be beyond stellar.”

“It’s weird when you think about it,” said Michael. “I mean, Brian was Justin’s first. And sure, he’s probably fucked more guys in more ways than I have since then, but it's sort of lucky, or fateful, or something, that he took Justin home anyway. Brian always insisted he didn’t do virgins. He said they know fuck-all about fucking.”

“Well, honey, have you seen our Sunshine’s cock? Brian may be a super-top, but he’s a cock man, just like the rest of us.” Emmett sounded authoritative. Justin stifled a laugh.

“How would you know what Justin’s cock looks like?” asked Ted.

“I’ve been in the back room, haven’t I? It would have been hard not to see it.”

“Good point,” said Ted.

“Hey,” said Brian behind him in a low voice. Justin jumped. Brian’s lips pressed to the top of Justin’s spine and he felt a wave of heat spread through his body from Brian’s mouth. But he wasn’t done listening, so he held up a hand. Brian stilled for a moment, hovering behind him, and Justin could feel the exact moment when he realized they were being discussed. Brian didn’t tense, exactly, he just seemed to become completely still, listening.

“It’s true,” said Michael. “Justin wasted no time in applying his new knowledge after he’d met Brian. He knows his way around the back room. I’d say he’s an expert by now.”

“Jesus, am I the only one who hasn’t seen them fucking?” asked Ted.

“Teddy, you never take your fucks to the back room, now do you? You have only yourself to blame.”

Brian pressed the length of his body against Justin’s back. He gripped Justin’s hips and gave the side of his neck a slow lick and then smiled against Justin’s skin when Justin shuddered a little. His lips moved up to tickle Justin’s ear. “Does it make you hot? Listening to them talk about us?” It wasn’t really a question, and Justin refused to reply anyway. He elbowed vaguely behind him, trying to keep up with the conversation and not get distracted by Brian’s many distracting qualities.

“Just because I prefer to fuck in the comfort of my own bed...” said Ted.

“Fucking isn’t about comfort, sweetie, it’s about hot, hard cock. Am I right?”

“He’s right,” agreed Michael, laughing

“This, from the married man,” said Ted.

“Hey, just because Ben and I are married doesn’t mean we don’t have interesting sex.”

There was a lull in the conversation, probably while everyone contemplated Ben and Michael having interesting sex. Justin could hear sounds of drinking.

Brian took advantage of this, and pressed his mouth to the other side of Justin’s neck. Justin’s eyes slid half-closed and he gave up the fight and leaned back against Brian, because really, he’d have to be stupid to fight off an amorous Brian. One of Brian’s hands snaked around and inside the band of Justin’s jeans, and his fingers stroked little circles lightly over Justin’s abdomen on their way down. Justin flinched, ticklish, and Brian laughed low. He coaxed Justin’s cock up so that it was trapped against his stomach and then began to steadily stroke him. Justin’s breath caught in his throat and he put a hand against the wall to steady himself. Brian’s other hand gripped Justin’s hip as he began to grind slowly against him. He forgot to care that they were in the entry hallway of a public bar. His consciousness shrank to focus on every place he and Brian touched, but he was vaguely aware that the conversation had veered back to them.

“I think they’re adorable together,” said Emmett. “I saw them once, cuddling. It was cold out and they were waiting for a cab home and Brian had Justin wrapped up in his coat with him. It was swoon-worthy.”

Adorable,” Brian muttered, contemptuously, then rubbed his nose through Justin’s hair, his hand stroking Justin a little faster.

“I know what you mean,” said Ted. “Whenever Justin visits the office, he gets a kiss hello. I don’t think they realize how sweet it is.” Justin grinned to himself and arched against Brian’s hand.

Sweet?” Brian sounded incensed. “Christ.” He bit Justin. Justin hastily swallowed back a moan just before Brian turned him around, pressed him against the wall, and kissed him hard.

“I’ve got you both beat,” said Michael. “One time I went over to the loft to give Justin some of my story ideas, and I found them eating take-out together. Justin was sitting in Brian’s lap and they were feeding each other. That, my friends, is the definition of cute.”

“Et tu, Michael?” Brian murmured against Justin’s mouth before kissing him again, this time a little less hard and a little more thoroughly. Just when Justin thought he might add Woody’s entry way to the list of public places Brian had made him come, Brian withdrew his hand from Justin’s jeans and tucked him back into them.

“C’mon Sunshine. I need a fucking drink.”

“I think you need to fuck me,” said Justin, trying to get his breathing back under control. Brian gave him a half-smile and a slow once-over.

“The bathroom in five minutes. We’re going to redefine cute.” He grimaced in distaste and stalked toward the bar, passing their friend’s table without so much as a glance. Justin took several deep breaths and willed his erection--damn Brian--down. When he figured he didn’t look quite so almost-fucked any more, he ducked through into the light and slid into a chair at the table.

“Hey guys,” he said, in what he hoped was a casual tone.

“Hey,” said Michael, echoed by Ted who patted him on the shoulder.

“And how are you?” said Emmett.

“We’re excellent,” said Brian, setting a beer down in front of Justin before he could answer. “In fact, one might even say we’re adorable.” Brian looked down at Justin. “Drink up, darling. We’ve got an appointment.” Justin downed half his beer in one swallow and slid smoothly to his feet.

He grinned up at Brian. “Ready, sweetie.”

Brian addressed the table. “And just for the record, we’re fucking cute,” he said. Then he cupped Justin’s neck, kissed his temple, and led him off to fuck in the bathroom.

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Comments

[info]ayesakara wrote:
Apr. 1st, 2005 05:41 pm (UTC)
Yummy. Horny Brian and hot Justin. My fave.

I just noticed one little typo: It was a crowded, even for a Friday night. The first 'a' needs to be cut.
[info]darksylvia wrote:
Apr. 1st, 2005 06:08 pm (UTC)
I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the heads up about the typo!
[info]citizenjess wrote:
Apr. 1st, 2005 06:50 pm (UTC)
I love how their conversation can go from Justin's ginormous cock to how domestic B/J are and have it make perfect sense. :>
[info]darksylvia wrote:
Apr. 2nd, 2005 09:45 pm (UTC)
Hehe. So true.

I sort of use as my model for group conversations, that one conversation in S2 where Lindsay gets pissy and is all,"can we not talk about sex for five minutes, please?" and they all sit around staring at each other.
[info]citizenjess wrote:
Apr. 2nd, 2005 09:52 pm (UTC)
That pretty much epitomizes the characters in roughly ten seconds. :D
[info]luciblue wrote:
Apr. 1st, 2005 07:15 pm (UTC)
I absolutely loved this. It was fantastic! :]
[info]darksylvia wrote:
Apr. 2nd, 2005 09:46 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
[info]parallactic wrote:
Apr. 2nd, 2005 05:14 am (UTC)
I really liked the switching back and forth between the gang's comments and almost!sex. Michael, Emmett, and Ted's comments were so funny.
[info]darksylvia wrote:
Apr. 2nd, 2005 09:50 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I love the guys' conversations in the show. I'm glad you thought they were funny.
[info]vedaprophet wrote:
Apr. 2nd, 2005 06:42 am (UTC)
ooooo I love!! Very cute story and amazing idea! I adore your writing style and your plots!! really, your work is so unique and wonderful! *loves* *waves [info]darksylvia fangirl flag* teehee...
[info]darksylvia wrote:
Apr. 2nd, 2005 09:51 pm (UTC)
Hee! OMG YAY! I have a fangirl flag!

I'm so glad you like my stories!
[info]cempakasari wrote:
Apr. 2nd, 2005 08:28 am (UTC)
This is quite a treat. It's hot and funny and cute; all at the same time.

You just keep getting better and better.
[info]darksylvia wrote:
Apr. 2nd, 2005 09:54 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much :)

You just keep getting better and better.

That totally made my day :D
[info]paddies wrote:
Apr. 2nd, 2005 09:36 am (UTC)
That was absolutely adorable! *grins*

And also v.v. hot... :D


Can I archive it on my site?
[info]darksylvia wrote:
Apr. 3rd, 2005 03:42 am (UTC)
Thank you!

Yeah, you can archive it. That would be really cool :) Your site is how I found [info]lennongirl for which I will forever be thankful!
[info]severina2001 wrote:
Apr. 2nd, 2005 09:52 am (UTC)
Ooh, what a great mix of hot and funny. All the dialogue sounds completely in character, too. Your writing is such fun! :)
[info]darksylvia wrote:
Apr. 2nd, 2005 09:55 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I certainly had fun writing it while I was supposed to be working.

Your stories are awesomely fun, too, btw.
[info]mirror_mirror wrote:
Apr. 2nd, 2005 02:48 pm (UTC)
I can see that happening. Exactly like that. Great work!
[info]darksylvia wrote:
Apr. 2nd, 2005 09:55 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
[info]scriptedending wrote:
Apr. 2nd, 2005 03:24 pm (UTC)
i really enjoyed this - very in character and to the point. and cute.
[info]darksylvia wrote:
Apr. 2nd, 2005 09:56 pm (UTC)
Thanks :D

I worry lots about in-characterness, you made me very happy.
[info]ceares wrote:
Apr. 3rd, 2005 02:08 am (UTC)
At the risk of pissing Brian off more-this is just fucking adorable. Hot, but cute and sweet too, and yeah, they are just too much when they are just being affectionate-holding hands, snuggling, or making out with each other.
This brought a smile to my face, thanks.
[info]darksylvia wrote:
Apr. 3rd, 2005 03:53 am (UTC)
Can't you just see him grimacing?

OMG I nearly killed myself when Emmett told about them cuddling in Brian's coat. I SWEAR I DIDN'T KNOW HE WAS GOING TO SAY THAT! IT WAS ALL EMMETT. I was channeling.

I'm glad it made you smile :)
[info]jnine36 wrote:
Apr. 3rd, 2005 01:27 pm (UTC)
Just read this at Gio's site. Weeeee!! Had to hunt down your lj to let you know I loved it. I got horny right along with them while eavesdropping, lol. Ohhh the ending, I love Sarcastic!Brian.
[info]darksylvia wrote:
Apr. 3rd, 2005 07:24 pm (UTC)
Wow, thanks for hunting down :)

You're right: Sarcastic Brian = teh HOTNESS
[info]nebulein wrote:
Apr. 4th, 2005 08:30 am (UTC)
I found you over [info]paddies' site and had to track you down here, too. I just totally adore this fic. They're so sweet and </i>cute</i> and hot. *guh* And so very canon! *squees* It was a delight to read it, you just gotta love the boys! :D Thank you for writing this.

~NEbU~
[info]darksylvia wrote:
Apr. 5th, 2005 04:06 am (UTC)
Ooo! I'm glad it was motivation enough to wonder over here :)

Thanks for the very happy comment! I'm so happy that you liked the story.
[info]flumsan wrote:
Apr. 8th, 2005 02:03 pm (UTC)
*gigglesnort* I just.. damn, I loved this. xD

The mixture between the "omg squeeeee!11!1!111!!!one B/J forever *flail*" and "omg hot *drool* XD" is just lovely.

Do I make sense? *giggles*
[info]darksylvia wrote:
Apr. 9th, 2005 02:23 am (UTC)
I don't know what it says about me, but yes, yes that made perfect sense :)

Thank you!
[info]flumsan wrote:
Apr. 8th, 2005 02:06 pm (UTC)
Oh and;

“I think they’re adorable together,” said Emmett. “I saw them once, cuddling. It was cold out and they were waiting for a cab home and Brian had Justin wrapped up in his coat with him. It was swoon-worthy.”

Swoon-worthy would be such an understatement. OMFG I would fall over and *die* at the sight of that. *sappy sigh*
[info]qafhappy wrote:
Apr. 12th, 2005 12:37 pm (UTC)
So hot, and snarkily cute!

*posted it!*
[info]darksylvia wrote:
Apr. 15th, 2005 04:06 am (UTC)
Oh good! Thanks!
[info]kitkatbyte wrote:
Apr. 14th, 2005 09:27 pm (UTC)
Heehee. They *are* fucking cute!

AND they DO feed each other take-out. This is amsuing.
[info]darksylvia wrote:
Apr. 15th, 2005 04:06 am (UTC)
I know! That take-out scene in S4 was SOOOOO cute. Until the stupid cancer.
[info]kitkatbyte wrote:
Apr. 15th, 2005 12:18 pm (UTC)
But it was *Justin* feeding *Brian*. I'd really love to see Brian feeding Justin. Just imagine how adorable!
[info]exsequar wrote:
Apr. 26th, 2005 12:51 am (UTC)
I was actually squeeing out loud at this! It was so adorable, as Emmett says :D Swoon worthy, even! Hee. I always love seeing other characters' viewpoints on the whole B/J dynamic, because it is so unique! And juxtaposing it with Brian stroking Justin in a public place... well that just epitomizes their relationship, now doesn't it? LOVED IT. :D
[info]darksylvia wrote:
Apr. 26th, 2005 06:22 am (UTC)
I'm glad you loved it! I have a soft spot a mile wide for Others-Recognizing-The-B/J-Love, and also for voyeuristic fics, which this one sort of falls into, a little. It came to me in a flash of insanity brillance. Or something.

But yeah. Thanks for reading it :)
[info]seanmegansean wrote:
Jul. 2nd, 2006 07:00 pm (UTC)
*points at icon*

Adorable, cute, yummy, hot, funny, love Temmett and even Michael, and B/J listening in on that convo is just the right amount of evil/sweet for me. In short, I LOVE it. THANK YOU :D
[info]darksylvia wrote:
Jul. 2nd, 2006 09:56 pm (UTC)
:D You're welcome. I'm glad you came back and read it!
[info]claramarie12 wrote:
Jul. 3rd, 2006 05:01 pm (UTC)
Another great fic from a non-B/J POV-- love it! I also love fics that involve the gang but without drama-- just them being good friends.
[info]darksylvia wrote:
Jul. 5th, 2006 06:31 pm (UTC)
I also love fics that involve the gang but without drama-- just them being good friends.

Me too! There aren't enough of them. Thanks!
[info]so_wildish wrote:
Jul. 5th, 2006 06:30 pm (UTC)
So funny. So good!
[info]darksylvia wrote:
Jul. 5th, 2006 06:48 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
[info]sdlucly wrote:
Oct. 27th, 2008 11:53 pm (UTC)
That was really great. And now I have this scene stuck in my head, with Justin feeding Brian shrimp (was it shrimp?) with chopsticks and now I can't quite remember where it was from. Damn it, that's gonna bother me. *g*

Still amazing! *bounces* Thanks!
[info]darksylvia wrote:
Oct. 28th, 2008 12:38 am (UTC)
Thank you!

The scene where Justin feeds Brian shrimp is I THINK post cancer in S4? I could be on crack, though. But yes, man it was SO CUTE.